“now the year takes vows” – Autumn, then Winter Haiku

now the year takes vows
of poverty; the gaudy
ginkgos dripping gold

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Several hours after publishing I have thought of an edit that perhaps ought to have been made:

now the trees take vows
of poverty; the gaudy
ginkgos dripping gold

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