“one sigh for beauty” – Autumn Haiku / Senryu

one sigh for beauty,
one loss, a third for longing;
autumn three sigh walk

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“new shorn fields” redux

Sorry for the repeat, but this has been bugging me since yesterday. There was one or two too many “ing”s in yesterday’s haiku. I also removed the comma. I think this is better.

new shorn fields layered
thick with morning mists glowing
bright in slanted light

or (with one missing syllable)

new shorn fields layered
thick with morning mists aglow
in slanted light

“crumb’ling, waxy, sweet” – Autumn Haiku

crumb’ling, waxy, sweet
autumn seeps into my tongue;
year’s first candy corn

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Raiding an office candy jar…you never know where you’ll find inspiration 🙂